The call of the sea
The pull of the tide
The scent of the briny water
Long before we reached the shore
We'd voted as one
For a trip to the coast
Four of us packed in the car
Off for a spin this fine day
Who is first to see
Will give a great cheer
Look there it is over there
As we approach the small town
The sand in our toes
Arguing seabirds
As they look for free pickings
So then we give them our scraps
Then breathe it right in
Salt smell of the sea
With the tide now at its full
Our toes take a tiny dip
We’re under its spell
Race over the sand
There’s no joy is quite like this
First to splash in the water
I’m there to explore
To find what I can
Seashells and pebbles
Among branches and driftwood
We’ve scoffed all our food
Drunk all our drink
As the sun sinks sadly down
Dissolving into the sea
So then we pack up
Wend our way back home
Giving the sea one last wave
Of course she gives us one too
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Of course. Love the ending.
ReplyDeleteThe last two lines are so good!!
ReplyDeletelove the play on 'wave'....
ReplyDeleteDelightful! Brings back many memories of such trips – both as child and parent.
ReplyDeleteWe’re under its spell
ReplyDeleteRace over the sand
There’s no joy is quite like this
First to splash in the water
Sigh.. such peaceful and serene images here :D Lovely write.
Luv the simpatico in this poem. Clearly the joy is not one sided
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday Robin
Much love...
What fun it is to be out on the beach for the whole day! Just being with the loved ones!
ReplyDeleteHank
What a beautiful day, so vividly described....sigh. I need just such a day soon.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of my childhood - I lived beside the Indian Ocean and spent a great deal of time at the beach.
ReplyDeleteSweet!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Oh that last line had me laughing with joy....as a matter of fact the whole poem was delightful and filled me with such memories. I grew up on the Jersey Shore, and the smell of the salt water, the sand in my toes, the pull of the water is spiritual for me still.
ReplyDeleteSome vivid images of a day at the seaside. We were put onto the same wavelength with this one - but your final wave breaks beautifully.
ReplyDeleteLovely. I think it sounds like something you could read to a child.
ReplyDeleteOh, when one can answer the call of the sea, it is such a lovely day :-)
ReplyDeletemarvellous memories invoked in this galloping rhythm of child like enthusiasm - yes brilliant last line
ReplyDeleteOne of your best...a keeper!I can hear the seagulls.
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