A drink in my hand
A crowded floor that Friday night
The band was loud and so were we
Free from work to do as we pleased
People jostled laughing out loud
Across the room I saw her there
Short dark hair and her eyes so bright
At the trad jazz club
The band was so loud
The dancers twirled their way around
As I now glanced around the room
She cocked her head looking at me
I made my way across to her
She lowered her eyes a small grin
Her friend nudged her without a sound
At the trad jazz club
She got to her feet
She was tiny about five foot none
On the packed floor her hands were warm
We twisted and turned to the beat
Up until they played “Petite Fleur”
Then she placed her head on my chest
Holding her close we were as one
At the trad jazz club
As if in a dream
I didn’t want to let her go
This little flower that bloomed for me
Took her back to her seat and friend
But never saw her there again
So many years have passed me by
I think of how I loved her so
At the trad jazz club
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Whistles!!! This is absolutely mesmerizing Robin :D love the atmosphere, the heat, the tension, moreover the blooming love between the couple before she got lost in the crowd. Beautifully executed. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support :D
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Sanaa
Heart-stoppingly romantic...a dream many of us share :D XXX
ReplyDeleteparty all night long, those were the days, luv today's write
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Oh those young carefree nights spent dancing!
ReplyDeleteOh those trad jazz clubs! How you take me back!
ReplyDeleteOh such a beautiful response Robin...so sad that the moment never lasted....
ReplyDeletewhat a beauty this poem is! love the narrative style and "At the trad jazz club"...the single line seems to hold so many stories....
ReplyDeleteIt's the small ones who are mysterious (so I am told) - you have captured the smoky intensity of a trad jazz club perfectly...who would want to leave that dance behind
ReplyDeleteOne of those super charged moments that stay with us forever... making us wonder if our entire life would have been different if the moment would have lasted... or if our life is what it is because the moment didn't go on... Just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteA night indelible in the narrator's memory. You captured the atmosphere, the mood, the moments, the romance. I felt like I lived this too.
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