Thursday, July 7, 2016

In the market place


Her dark eyes entranced me
Shyly she lowered them
A small smile on her lips
I was in love again
With this beautiful girl
In the town's market place

Just for a change I thought I would write a six lined poem with six syllables each line

Image found at www.colourbox.com

9 comments:

  1. Very good. I almost went to a foreign market as well. Nice.

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  2. This sparks the imagination, i like it!

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  3. I love the picture you provided of the inspiration for your story. Foreign markets are beautiful places for sensory experiences.

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  4. You write very heartfelt love poems. The image you chose is perfect for your poem. Annie at ~McGuffy's Reader~

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  5. Wonderful poem and story of feelings expressed. :)

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  6. cool... the economy of words, the wealth of inference and impressions!

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  7. Ah, I love it, Old Egg. Beautiful imagery and feeling packed into few words. Nicely done.

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  8. Wow!!! Skillfully woven! lovely.

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  9. Wow!!! Skillfully woven! lovely.

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