Thursday, 7 July 2016

In the market place


Her dark eyes entranced me
Shyly she lowered them
A small smile on her lips
I was in love again
With this beautiful girl
In the town's market place

Just for a change I thought I would write a six lined poem with six syllables each line

 Image found at www.colourbox.com

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9 comments:

  1. Unknown7 July 2016 at 03:58

    Very good. I almost went to a foreign market as well. Nice.

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  2. messymimi7 July 2016 at 04:15

    This sparks the imagination, i like it!

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  3. Anonymous7 July 2016 at 05:23

    I love the picture you provided of the inspiration for your story. Foreign markets are beautiful places for sensory experiences.

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  4. Anonymous7 July 2016 at 16:18

    You write very heartfelt love poems. The image you chose is perfect for your poem. Annie at ~McGuffy's Reader~

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  5. Unknown7 July 2016 at 17:02

    Wonderful poem and story of feelings expressed. :)

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  6. clarkscottroger7 July 2016 at 18:06

    cool... the economy of words, the wealth of inference and impressions!

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  7. Anonymous7 July 2016 at 18:39

    Ah, I love it, Old Egg. Beautiful imagery and feeling packed into few words. Nicely done.

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  8. Unknown8 July 2016 at 22:01

    Wow!!! Skillfully woven! lovely.

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  9. Unknown8 July 2016 at 22:01

    Wow!!! Skillfully woven! lovely.

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