Her eyes glanced shyly at him
Fingers playing with her hair
As he glanced at her
He'd loved her so much
So quickly she looked away
Lest he think she wanted him
But that was the truth
Right through her childhood
That was their own hidden realm
Holding hands on the way to school
That warm loving touch
So many years ago
Now that they had met again
She didn’t know what to say
All these years later
Her heart in her mouth
He came over and then spoke
“Do you remember me?” he asked
The train rattled on
He sat beside her
She nodded “Of course I do”
Their hands were almost touching
He felt her fingers
While she closed her eyes
She whispered “I’m married now”
His hand was now holding hers
“Yes I feel the ring”
He turned, their eyes met
She felt so frightened at first
But then it became routine
Commuters chatting
With their dark secret
Each morning they caught that train
On the way to the city
Just two friends talking
No one noticed them
This is soo beautiful! I could feel each word and the emotion within. Especially adore 'That was their own hidden realm,holding hands on the way to school,that warm loving touch so many years ago.' Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support :D
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Sanaa
now...that's what 'hidden realm' is for, a bit of darkness & a bit of laughter :)
ReplyDeleteBittersweet and sad... Some hidden realms burn so deeply... and for so long. I wonder where their story will go...
ReplyDeleteLuv this realm of innocence you shared
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
Lovers are adept in creating hidden realms. I hope that they can find a way towards a happy end to their story.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful love story! :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautifully poignant story...I'm sure many of us have been there on occasion XXX
ReplyDeleteLoved this one!!
ReplyDeleteA lovely story of lovers beginning again where they left off,,,hand in hand,,no harm intended,,sweet gifts,,
ReplyDeleteOh what a fabulous poem Robin...2 old lovers caught in a hidden realm again on a train....loved this!
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