Wednesday, July 19, 2017

Standing at the corner


I was standing at the corner just watching the world go by.
When a girl oh so pretty caught my roving and eager eye.
She saw me look then blushed crimson red which proved that I was right.
Soon we were walking hand in hand with a touch of such delight.
And at her gate that first kiss took me to perfect paradise.
I started to go back home then turned to see her laughing eyes.

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10 comments:

  1. the imagery and the verse go hand-in-hand.
    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/07/photo-prompt-kent-bonham-i-always-stand.html

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  2. That's such a beautiful poem, OE. Loved it .

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  3. dude! (here I am trying to write one of your (prose) Sixes that so stand out and and I realize that you've moved on into even more un-discovered country (at least for me in my efforts) with the poetry.
    Very cool

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  4. Damn good one, dude. Awesome is the word for this love poem.

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  5. You are a romantic! So many of your 6's are brief flashes of love stories. I love it :)

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  6. A lovely six sentence poem! Well done.

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