Wednesday, 19 July 2017

Standing at the corner


I was standing at the corner just watching the world go by.
When a girl oh so pretty caught my roving and eager eye.
She saw me look then blushed crimson red which proved that I was right.
Soon we were walking hand in hand with a touch of such delight.
And at her gate that first kiss took me to perfect paradise.
I started to go back home then turned to see her laughing eyes.

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10 comments:

  1. Reena Saxena19 July 2017 at 22:06

    Romantic to the core!

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  2. Samyuktha Semi Jayaprakash20 July 2017 at 01:54

    Awww

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  3. Paul Brads20 July 2017 at 03:50

    So good! Well done you.

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  4. kalpana solsi20 July 2017 at 04:13

    the imagery and the verse go hand-in-hand.
    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/07/photo-prompt-kent-bonham-i-always-stand.html

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  5. moon20 July 2017 at 04:50

    That's such a beautiful poem, OE. Loved it .

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  6. messymimi20 July 2017 at 05:04

    Ah, first love!

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  7. Clark Farley20 July 2017 at 05:07

    dude! (here I am trying to write one of your (prose) Sixes that so stand out and and I realize that you've moved on into even more un-discovered country (at least for me in my efforts) with the poetry.
    Very cool

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  8. NEEL ANIL PANICKER20 July 2017 at 06:31

    Damn good one, dude. Awesome is the word for this love poem.

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  9. GirlieOnTheEdge20 July 2017 at 17:35

    You are a romantic! So many of your 6's are brief flashes of love stories. I love it :)

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  10. Pat B20 July 2017 at 22:55

    A lovely six sentence poem! Well done.

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