Friday, 7 July 2017

My heart skipped a beat

My heart skipped a beat when I first saw you
Your eyes like deep dark pools of mystery
A smile that turned all heads not only mine
With soft skin, brown as summer berries
Was it possible that you would look at me?
You turned, smiled then nodded, you were devine

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  1. Wow! Lovely poem, OE. And it's so hypnotic when cherished imaginations become realities.

  2. Wow. What a lovely write. Ivy / zoe

  3. I really have to read the other comments BEFORE I write.... this is almost exactly what Moon said....but if it's true then.... ivy/zoe

  4. Really a beautiful poem about it obviously beautiful person. Nice job!

  5. She is indeed amazingly beautiful, the perfect subject for your perfect poem, you do romantic thoughts far better than anyone else I know, Old Egg!

  6. I'm envious*

    *total compliment, very excellent words (and arrangement).

  7. This photo and the post rendered me simply speechless...Could not take off my eyes starting at the beauty of the lady's looks... Couldn't fathom the depths of her emotions...Very captivating look and an alluring emotion spread wide across the face! No wonder you were spellbound!!!
    Anagha From Team MocktailMommies