Friday, April 15, 2016

Such a glorious morning


A wink through the window
Sun flirts with me again
Though my wife's in bed with me
I get up, one smiles the other groans
And pulls the covers over her head
As I feel the warm embrace 
Of the new day dawning

What better love is this?
Than to woo me softly
Then when so enraptured
Wrap me with her passionate heat
To set the world singing again
Birds twittering, fluffy clouds dashing
Such a glorious morning

Lazy bones at last appears
Enticing still in her nightie
Grabs my hand lest I stray
Shakes an angry finger at the sun
Pulls me back inside the house
Laughing makes a cup of coffee
"You're mine" she says in warning

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23 comments:

  1. My goodness :D this is stunning both in words and image. I absolutely adore the depiction of love in this verse. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. That makes me smile. "You're mine" she says in warning" Look out sun.

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  3. I'm grinning from ear to ear. I love this flashes of love and happiness and pure natural sense. Your poem is pure brightness, and those last two lines? A supernova of loving life. ♥

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  4. love this image of the sun as femme fatale & of course the last line :)

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  5. "Sun flirts with me again
    Though my wife's in bed with me
    I get up, one smiles the other groans"

    lovely awakening for you

    much love...

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  6. Really lovely image of love between a long term couple.

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  7. Ha.. Not easy with one person loving dawn the other one dreads. The sun is a tempting mistress.

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  8. aww...this is so lovely and romantic :)

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  9. What a way to start the day!Perfect!

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  10. If only all mornings (or even one) could be as promising

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  11. ahhhh...this is very appeasing for me. I love that lazy/peaceful/happy feeling of waking up in the mornings and to top it off with the sun and a caffeine drink. Great write ODG.

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  12. Love the romance in your words!!

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  13. Oh I adore this Robin especially the ending, and the romantic fun of your words...my lazy bones is my husband who doesn't want to welcome the sun either...

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  14. I wish all days could be like this you have described.

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  15. Oh, how I love this. '"You're mine", she says in warning.' Absolutely wonderful.

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  16. There's no denying love is all the more hot when least expected!

    Hank

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  17. now that is sweetness in a nutshell for you

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  18. This is definitely a lovely depiction of a glorious morning....such a peacefulness and warmth inherent in these words :-)

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  19. This is wonderful - so intimate and tender ... the comfort of precious familiarity, with a lovely lilt of good humor.

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  20. What a window, what a view. The warning as well, loving and capturing. The way it should be.

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  21. Smiles and groans to greet the day---what more can we say? :)

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