Whether by luck or design
I fell in love with you
You eyes shone bright as stars
You move with such sweet grace
Gliding into my life
I wonder if you see me?
There's a boy who looks at me
I pretend I don't care
He's gentle and sincere
Will he make the first move?
The other girls are jealous
So must smile at him soon
Did she nod at me just then?
I will smile back at her
Good I am going over
Good he is coming over
I love the way he talks
Can we keep it a secret?
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You have given me a smile. How could that possibly be a secret?
ReplyDeleteSigh... love is a design mysterious to the eyes.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully executed.
Wow! This is such a delightfully romantic poem. Absolutely loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThe ways of a woman will always a mystery to a man...it took thousands of years to become ingrained in our DNA and we are never going to disclose our secrets:)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the two sets of thoughts you've brought together...
ReplyDeleteBody talk, soul talk, and only - just word talk. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteaha...that's a romantic design..lovely..
ReplyDeleteLove this poem, Robin...dearly romantic, and it really touches on the most basic of emotions !! Very nice....
ReplyDeleteOoh...the puzzle of attraction - we like...perhaps nothing is entirely by chance..not once circumstances are in our hands
ReplyDeleteIndeed, sometimes we don't know WHY we fall in love...but after it happens, does it really matter? Design or luck - not so important in the face of the power of love.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the dual inner dialogue of the two young people. Very cool.
ReplyDeletelovely! design for sure
ReplyDeletemuch love...
ah! the typical design of teenage romance. sweet.
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