Saturday, March 7, 2015

For the final time



Let’s begin again
That is what you said
I should have laughed
At your excuses
Trampled on your words
Thrown them in the wind
To let such manure
Fertilise the plants
You’d string me along
As you did before
To drive me insane
I’m not your putty
To fill some weird need
To be kneaded with spite
With my wings clipped
Those days are gone
I have paid my dues
To your own weird club
For the final time
Imagine that loser
It's you that's been stung


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13 comments:

  1. Well done. A sorry tale of betrayal that makes more sense than the wordle words deserve! :-)

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  2. Well done. A sorry tale of betrayal that makes more sense than the wordle words deserve! :-)

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  3. Touche! If you're going to go out...go out with a bang..like the fire in this one Old Egg..

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  4. Ouch ... and after a mope about ... so sweetly repentant ... "how understanding you are .. of course you are right" ... she's back again ... hope not...

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  5. I guess it's finally come to an end, right? (One would certainly hope so!)

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  6. Well done.

    I have been debating how to shape something from the prompt words.

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  7. Oooh...ouch. This one is feisty!! Like that edge.

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  8. Take it no more....I said that once, and it was the best decision of my life!

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  9. This one is far more real for some of us than for others. I like the feisty edge you portray so well,

    Elizabeth

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  10. I love how, in these few lines you've succinctly summed up betrayal...very nice.

    http://soundofthewordnight.blogspot.ca/2015/03/castles-made-of-flour.html?view=classic

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  11. I love how, in these few lines you've succinctly summed up betrayal...very nice.

    http://soundofthewordnight.blogspot.ca/2015/03/castles-made-of-flour.html?view=classic

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  12. Many people are quite happy to have someone around to take advantage of, and they'll use any words at their disposal to get their victim. Good on this person for figuring it out.

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  13. Some people deserve a sting. Well done.

    Pamela

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