I have lost you I know I should buy some flowers You liked them in the house Would have had the place full But still I dream of you Thinking you are still here Yes, they transform my flat Have to keep them watered It's not all shiny now Don't dust the furniture I miss the words you spoke And listen to you breathe It was so easy then Not like the present time My eyes water again Don't object to cooking Just being all alone Another day goes by Image found at www.prissma.in
Beautifully sad, OE. It is my hope to go before my husband. Selfish, I know, but I never want to feel that emptiness.
ReplyDeleteso poignant, nicely penned :)
ReplyDeletePlaintive and sad: I hope it is fiction!
ReplyDeleteWhen you have lost the flower in your life loneliness is even harder to bear..poignantly written
ReplyDeletereminds me very much of my father, how I imagine him in the years after mom passed, though he would never by flowers....
ReplyDeleteHow very sad, but real this is...
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
This breaks my heart.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the poignancy of being alone so beautifully ... it made my heart ache. Well done.
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a message to the missing...
ReplyDeleteflowers and shininess
a missive to the missed
tears in the mist...
poignant. I felt your sadness, longing.
Randy