My strength is now sapped Like a dying river All shallows with no depth A struggling fish reeled in Then dying of grief All my old bones ache I collapse from within A mask is torn from me My true self revealed What a hopeless wreck Once radiant sun now dim Shining no more for me A lion with no teeth Off the beaten track Longing for that dim past To emerge once again But that's not to be For you have long gone Image found at www.alsuffa.blogspot.com
Goodness me, this is a sad poem!
ReplyDeleteOh gosh how sad. Gone but never to be forgotten.
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Sadness mixed with acceptance and regret. This is strong work, OE. I like where you took the words.
ReplyDeleteCollapsing from within and a lion with no teeth....some strong imagery here, Robin! Powerful.
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