Jim hobbles along I hear the tap of his cane Before I see him The athlete now gone Imagining better days Disguised to most I remember him Swarthy sportsman in his prime Footballer of note What smooths his way now? Uncanny the change of time He's past wanting fame Such songs that were sung Poems of his fearsome skill I too dread this day Image found at www.pinstopin.com
I think we all dread that day..i love the rhythm of this like the cliquey clack of that cane which aches to be a pair of running shoes...a beautifully poised and paced poem
I think we all dread that day..i love the rhythm of this like the cliquey clack of that cane which aches to be a pair of running shoes...a beautifully poised and paced poem
ReplyDeleteBy cliquey we mean clickety - unless there is a secret society of cane users out there!
ReplyDeleteThat is our secret society Jae, the 'Cliquey Clacks' sounds right to me.
ReplyDeleteI suspect that both of us have the same attitude to the passing of the years! Older and wiser I say. Life gets better as the years roll by!
ReplyDeleteOh such longing and incipient dread in this one - and yet a sweetness
ReplyDeleteAs we all do.
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming by to visit.
Have a blessed week.