What strange creatures these Dumb and chiseled faces see nought Of Eden's beauty Such superior ways Drunk with wine and mad power Human race of shame They have stained this earth Foreign being without soul Winner for no cause Cruel feckless wild beast While we cower in hollows Puzzled with strange fear Where is tomorrow? O for a luminous dawn Without mankind's tread Come quickly that day When his fate is made lucid Earth free once again Image found at www.melleum.com
I like how the question changes the pace of the poem. It gives a clean break between a purely descriptive part of the poem and the active part expressing the desire of a different tomorrow.
It's coming quickly enough.
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I like how the question changes the pace of the poem. It gives a clean break between a purely descriptive part of the poem and the active part expressing the desire of a different tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteAll the world is beautiful and only man is vile.
ReplyDeleteA beautifully written cascade of haiku ... I enjoyed reading this very much Robin.
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