I lay in the dim dark woods
Looking at the sky above
Clouds racing southward
Remembering you
Surely twenty years have passed
All that time without your love
My fingers touch the soil
No consolation
I recall you leaning on me
Your warm breath on my cheek
What a purple patch for us
That time we made love
Oh what a donkey I am
To think I can find you again
In this sweet hollow
Of mystic pleasures
My feeble brain recalls
A pestilence of memories
For if you treat love lightly
It will disappear
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Such a sad story. Well wordled.
ReplyDeleteMy comment disappeared. Hm! Well written!
ReplyDeleteThis unfolds like the best of fairy tales..so real they hurt...
ReplyDeleteA sad love story wonderfully penned.
ReplyDeleteEverything needs to be nurtured to survive !
ReplyDeleteYou wove those words together well.
ReplyDeleteVery good use of the words. I love seeing where different poets go with the same words. Beautiful photo as well.
ReplyDeleteah.....you are forever the romantic!
ReplyDeletesad, yet vivid memories
ReplyDeleteYou end with great words of wisdom: love treated lightly will disappear. Yes, that's the way of it.
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