Sunday, November 9, 2014

This girl I know



This girl I know
she has no past
now just how long can that last?     

I love her hair
I love her eyes
and I weep too when she cries                   

We touch fingers
and we touch toes
I like to kiss her turned up nose      

And just for her
I want to be
just that one special memory                      

This girl I know
is very strong
so she'd just laugh at this song           


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18 comments:

  1. maybe she would - but maybe she wouldn't - would be worth trying to get to know her?

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  2. The strongest emotions make us strong!

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  3. I hope she does not.. it's a sweet love song. :-)

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  4. eventually she'll know :-)

    guess she'll blush humming this song...

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  5. I am hearing this as a song, smiles ~ Seems like a special girl to sing to ~

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  6. A very neat love song that poses its own question. Perhaps you could sing it while she's near.

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  7. This sounds to me like a poem to a grandchild. If so, I can identify. For each of them I would like to be (someday) a 'special memory.' A very touching poem, Robin.

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  8. There's a lovely rhythm to this poem.

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  9. I like your sweet words and how it can be read at different levels, oldegg!

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  10. simple and sweet. very beautiful!

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  11. Awww...What a wonderful thing!very beautiful!

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  12. Yes, like Mary, this to me reads like a poem to a grandchild. It is very very sweet.

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  13. Such a romantic for an old egg :-)
    ZQ

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  14. I hope that she always remain happy... Untouched by harsh realities of life

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  15. aw this is so sweet. i like the part about her past, how perhaps you are hopeful to become a part of it. :)

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