Standing on the beach
Watching the cold rain slash down
Summer in
Children untroubled
Still played on without the sun
They were not jaded
The beach tent hid us
The kids enjoyed the grey day
So they laughed with joy
So my wife sang out
“Come on sun, burn off those clouds
Wind blow them away”
She had influence
The sun soon sparked into life
We were satisfied
We were satisfied
Beach, sunshine, clouds, rain, nice combination of all the elements of nature:)!!
ReplyDeleteI like the joy and optimism of your poem very much.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely the most optimistic take on the Wordle words I've read so far. Lovely & welcome change of pace :-) And, who wouldn't be satisfied by a day at the beach??
ReplyDeleteDefinitely summer in England.
ReplyDeleteSatisfied is good for a UK beach...wind, rain and no actual sand...but it makes for hardy folk who are easily pleased...i am glad the wish worked too
ReplyDeleteShe is a powerful woman!
ReplyDeleteLovely and simply filled with delight. Thank you for the smile and that warm feeling now around my heart
ReplyDeleteI can't help but wonder what's going on with the couple hidden in the beach tent...
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ReplyDeleteWe have lots of beach days like this where I live. Delightful poem!
ReplyDeleteWonderful slice of life, sunshine and rain, but we continue...
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
"She had influence"
ReplyDeleteA great line.
Nice haiku poem.
Randy
How nice! :)x
ReplyDeleteLovely to live with a weather witch! A fun poem, I enjoyed it very much ... and I love how you told the story with this great series of haiku!
ReplyDeleteI was there yesterday and yes, that's just how it looked!
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