Thursday 10 October 2019

My girl's eyes always light up


When we go for a walk in the meadow

If the buttercups are in bloom, she smiles
Then she will lay down with them
They grin back at her
The bees buzz and fly away
While the Sun hides behind a cloud
They all know I will kiss her

She sighs, but I know that she is happy



Image found at www.istockphoto,com/ae.photo/teenage-girl-in-dress-in-field-of-buttercups-gm691866878-127697555


11 comments:

  1. What a sweet and tender poem

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  2. This is so romantic, Robin!❤️

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  3. "They all know I will kiss her" and "I know that she is happy" I like that there seems to be a sense of knowing without the need of telling.

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  4. I love the personification of the elements- very sweet❤️

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  5. Lovely to have buttercups grinning!

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  6. I love how simple and tender this piece is, a snapshot of a perfect afternoon.

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  7. I just love the thought (and mental image) of blooms smiling back. How happy they must be. And that would certainly spread.

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  8. a kiss that will be remembered :)

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