Thursday, 10 October 2019

My girl's eyes always light up


When we go for a walk in the meadow

 If the buttercups are in bloom, she smiles
Then she will lay down with them
They grin back at her
The bees buzz and fly away
While the Sun hides behind a cloud
They all know I will kiss her

 She sighs, but I know that she is happy

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11 comments:

  1. Jae Rose11 October 2019 at 03:31

    What a sweet and tender poem

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi11 October 2019 at 06:22

    This is so romantic, Robin!❤️

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  3. Lori11 October 2019 at 07:15

    "They all know I will kiss her" and "I know that she is happy" I like that there seems to be a sense of knowing without the need of telling.

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  4. Vivian Zems11 October 2019 at 12:11

    I love the personification of the elements- very sweet❤️

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  5. Susan11 October 2019 at 21:31

    Lovely to have buttercups grinning!

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  6. Rommy12 October 2019 at 04:56

    I love how simple and tender this piece is, a snapshot of a perfect afternoon.

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  7. Sherry Blue Sky12 October 2019 at 05:49

    This is lovely!

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  8. Magaly Guerrero12 October 2019 at 11:53

    I just love the thought (and mental image) of blooms smiling back. How happy they must be. And that would certainly spread.

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  9. Margaret13 October 2019 at 20:35

    a kiss that will be remembered :)

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  10. Sreeja13 October 2019 at 23:14

    Lovely!!

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  11. purplepeninportland.com14 October 2019 at 17:02

    Ah, romance is alive!

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