Sunday, 27 August 2017
We'd hold hands
I liked the way you cut your hair
I even liked the clothes you'd wear
With you in trousers just like me
Striding down the road happy as can be
You weren't one-eyed like other girls
Had long fair hair but not in curls
Happy waving your hand at me
To go exploring birch woods running free
We slipped our shoes off just for fun
Wading the river's calmer run
Then washed the mud from our toes
We'd both kiss then, Shhh! As no-one else knows
Retreating from our trysting place
We'd hold hands and sometimes embrace
Chatting about the day we had
Wondering what story you'd sell your dad
Soon we had crossed the railway line
And checked to see we both looked fine
You dumped your sabre, me my gun
We then waved goodbye we just had such fun
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Note: With regard to the "sabre and gun" line, In recalling my days of childhood exploring in the woods a stick was necessary to beat back the nettles or poke into holes hoping to find things rather than your hands. It could be converted to a gun to pretend to shoot aircraft out the sky or a large bird that seemed too curious about us being there. The stick was usually discarded before we got home.
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Childhood,
Children,
Poetry,
Poets United,
Sunday Whirligig
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Sounds like a childhood memory, Robin. So innocent and gentle. Made me smile :)
ReplyDeleteChildhood... what a time!!!
ReplyDelete"Shhh! As no-one else knows"...Enchanting, isn't it? :)
ReplyDeleteThis is soo wonderfully sweet and tender, Robin!❤️
ReplyDeleteWhat an idyllic experience, written with such warmth!
ReplyDeleteI love this section:
ReplyDelete"Retreating from our trysting place
We'd hold hands and sometimes embrace
Chatting about the day we had
Wondering what story you'd sell your dad
Soon we had crossed the railway line
And checked to see we both looked fine
You dumped your sabre, me my gun"
~Shawna
Children with sabers and guns? Oh, my!
ReplyDeleteSo much innocence so much fun. Luv it. Happy Sunday Robin
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
This is delightful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet youthful memory. A refreshing surcease from disturbing news at every term!
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet place where you could just be children... lovely
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this one, took be way back. Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteI have a feeling those sabers and guns were sticks...love the secret kissing and the innocence of those childhood days.
ReplyDeleteOh to be back and enjoying days like that now. Summer especially reminds me of being young again. Awesome!
ReplyDelete"Wondering what story you'd sell your dad"
ReplyDeleteSigh. Sticks and stones and brooks and trees are all the toys we'd need . . . .
You took me back to the innocent romance of childhood.
ReplyDeleteAh... those delightful remember whens. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteAn idyllic childhood scene sweetly rendered. Thank you for taking me back to those golden days ~ sigh ~
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this – and I knew what you meant by gun and sabre (I had the same kind).
ReplyDeleteThis delight swimming in this poem is so sweet, Robin. I particularly love the secret (Shhhh!). Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet memory you recount here. Enjoyed reading this and appreciate the innocence of those times.
ReplyDelete(You commented on my poem today. Thanks, as always. Just want to let you know that I'm still going to write though I like to paint. Writing is more ingrained in my soul as it is definitely in yours.)
Ahhh childhood. I was thinking of fishing rods so it's good you explained the saber and gun.
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ReplyDeletemuch love...
I remember using a stick just the same way. Most of the time I tossed it aside at the end of the day, but sometimes it piled up by the back door.
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