Thursday, June 29, 2017

Her skin was soft


Her skin was soft as a ripe peach
Her eyes sparkled like the morning dew
Her nose tilted in a seductive way
I wanted to reach out to touch her hair
Sitting side by side that we now were
But we were in church at morning prayer

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9 comments:

  1. Very vivid piece, and especially loved the twist at the end. Well done, and a delightful read indeed.

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  2. Been there, done that! Great story. Lusting in the house of the Lord! Shameless.

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  3. Not a bad place to recognize spiritual beauty that often causes the physical body to look beautiful too.
    Sweet six.

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  4. damn! I missed the subtext until I read the comments! (thanks guys) lol

    (and that makes an even more excellent Six! I'm re-playing the story the new(er) perspective)

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  5. This was great, it is true that the mind sometimes tends to wander a bit during long church sessions. It sounds like it might be difficult for a young man to ignore this beauty sitting next to him. :-)

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  6. Beautiful spin on love, as always.

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  7. Heehee. All done in in the last line that reveals setting.

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  8. Oh, how our minds wander in church. Poetical description that left me with a big smile at the end.

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