I heard you breathing
Such soft gentle whispering
Like sweet kisses blown
In nights darkness
Just for me alone
I touched you gently
Barely rousing from your dream
You stirred with pleasure
And hummed to me
A sweet song of love
Wrapped up together
Your warm flesh now welcomed me
As we became one
T'was then you spoke
"Don't ever leave me"
By morn you were gone
You husband returned today
Just how long to wait
Until next time
Our dangerous game
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Thank you Sanaa for hosting Prompt Nights I enjoyed every one
Whistles!!❤️💝This is such an incredibly sensuous write, Robin! Especially love; "I heard you breathing such soft gentle whispering. Like sweet kisses blown in nights darkness. Just for me alone" Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support❤️💝
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Sanaa
Whoa! I didn't see the ending coming. Very passionately written in any case.
ReplyDeleteWhen you show the dark, you break our hearts with it. That ending, my dear universe... the intensity.
ReplyDeleteI'm off for a shower! Very emotive writing.
ReplyDeleteOh, that was a surprise ending! And gives an edge to the preceding gentle voluptuousness, making it all the more ecstatic while it lasts.
ReplyDeleteAh.. and the twist in the tale! Fun!
ReplyDeleteThe intensity and passion awaken senses, and touches emotions. This is a beautiful and sensuous piece, Robin.
ReplyDeleteouch...dangerous game is fun to the players...
ReplyDeleteA very dangerous game - played by millions.
ReplyDeleteThe forbidden twist at the end...wonderful read!
ReplyDeleteWell, that was a surprise.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Such descriptive sensuous wonder ... until one learns it's born of deception! You led us all to that shocker ending. Good write!
ReplyDeleteMaybe it's the danger that keeps it alive... but of course the husband will know ... sooner or later.
ReplyDeleteAh, the lure of forbidden love....
ReplyDeleteWow, the twist at the ending was a surprise. Well done.
ReplyDeleteDidn't expect that ending. Good writing.
ReplyDeleteThe title and start of this most certainly made the ending more of a surprising dark twist!
ReplyDeleteThat was quite the twist at the end, but life is full of twists and turns.
ReplyDeleteI love the intimacy in this poem. Unexpected ending :)
ReplyDeleteDangerous liaison indeed! But such wonderful intimacy would be hard to resist,,,I enjoy your romantic poetry very much,,,
ReplyDeleteSigh. Is forbidden love so much more sensual than that enjoyed legally and daily? I doubt it, and yet smiled at your breathtaking poem of love and loss.
ReplyDeleteKABOOM - the sound of reality landing. lol. What an ending!
ReplyDeleteOh, a dangerous game indeed!
ReplyDeleteYep, that's a game where there are too often no winners.
ReplyDeleteI wonder, is that brief moment of stolen pleasure, worth the price, which must be paid, upon discovery? Of being branded, with the scarlet letter, by your partner.
ReplyDeleteIt is a dangerous game, agreed, Robin! (but worth all the fun)
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Hank
That last stanza is a stunner, What a surprise
ReplyDeletemuch love...
oooow...naughty...but oh so nice ;) Beautiful imagery, I could smell the warm flesh XXX
ReplyDeletedangerously dark and beautifully put together!!
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