Great images and i like how the fear seeps through this. I felt a chill
doesn't sound like a place I would like to visit
There are those who cause mischief and unwitting impact on others.Such persons need to be told immediately before they cause any further damage! That's how I read this! Great write oldegg!Hank
Chilling and as someone else said, not a place I'd want to visit. Elizabeth
Omg, OldEgg. It's really scared me...and this red at the picture, reflected in the paddle...Hope it is a bad dream!
My hands are shaking!
Reminds me of 'The House on the Borderland'. Eerie!
Perfect picture for your dark poem. Enjoyed the read.
The words lent themselves perfectly to this one!
ew...my youngest son devours stories and shows about zombies! this fits right up his alley, but I wouldn't want to read this at night when I'm alone. well done for the genre!
Sometimes you have to do what you have to do..to survive and keep yourself safe..I am glad you gave it a whirl..certainly led you down a very good path
Their "shee" stooddraped in nothingbut redlife brightensthis leached out seemingly lifeless wastelandso beautiful to seethese words came to beI bet she wishes she thoughtahead abouta belt, or waistband...Christopher McQueeney
I feel like I need to be screaming, "DON'T GO INTO THE HOUSE!" like in those horror movies. Eerie, indeed. Well done.
The storm always seems to have a need to come...but on its own timetable, not ours...which is sad, really...not to mention disturbing...A Singular Whirl
Yes, a storm needs to come to cleanse the place. I like the creepy nature of this one.
...this reminds me of a real story where the very same happened....