and we both knew that even a few feetwere an unbearable distance apart. ~ Such beautiful love!
Like the visible/invisible finite/infinite contrast.
Lovely love story. I hope the love was infinite rather than finite.
Aw, sweet. I really love it when a man writes of love. It gives me hope for 'mankind'!
Beautiful..I am glad that first brave step was taken..
Such a sweet and tender poem. So lovely to imagine such a beautiful outcome from a 'magnificent impulse.'
Luck + guts.And a nicely hidden wordle)
This is a beautiful expression of love. Sweet and intense.
I loved this,just totally loved it,maybe Im just a old romantic :-)
I love your love poems, Old Egg. They are always so passionate.Pamela
Sigh!!! Such a beautiful love story!
very tender. Nicely wordled. The clenched fists of nervousness gave me a real glimpse into the courage to approach the beauty.
Reminds me of couples who take out the 'Thou shalt obey out of vows' - as there is no need when respect is mutual. Here's hoping that you will always have that spark.Thanks for your visit. I think romance will be delayed in my story - as evil has to be conquered first ;)~Jules
Love is as much about keeping that distance as it is about drawing close.
All will be well as long as they keep that distance between them as sacred space.Elizabeth
The tenderness and mutuality shine through!
Wonderful act of wooing is not old fashioned. It still can be countered on. Nicely Robin!Hank
I like how you clenched your fists and 'there were no precise words of love' ~ love this poem of yours, OldEgg!