ooh scarily good
Very creative use of the words. You have a way to go yet before the ferry ride:)
I guess we all have to pay sooner or later, don't we? Nice!
Funny, he looks like Baron Münchhausen....lol
Very scary. I like how calm the speaker of the poem seems, in spite of the impending horror. (and humbird is right, Charon does look like the Baron!)
The sulphur lingers..turn him away and hold onto your coins..
What an interesting mix of "calm-tension." It's very effective here.