Saturday 2 November 2019

Brother deer


I don't want to make a fuss my friend
But whats on your breath for heaven sake?
Guess you've been down the humans lake 
Drinking their water full of muck 
You should have known better - silly buck

Mind you that gives me a better chance
Don't fancy your hopes with that beaut hind
She'll sniff you and you'll be left behind
Then you'll have to wait 'til next year
I think you've lost out brother dear

Illustration by courstesy of Jason Limberg

11 comments:

  1. A telling commentary on the state of fresh water the world around. Thank you for writing to this prompt.

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  2. Love it with writers go in an unexpected direction with a challenge .... bravo!

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  3. I definitely think that this idea has lost out on some sugar! 😂

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  4. Oh deer, that's a foul way... wonderful

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  5. LOL...this gave me a good giggle

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  6. "that gives me a better chance"... ha

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  7. Oh water woe and relationship loss....love it

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