I don't want to make a fuss my friend
But whats on your breath for heaven sake?
Guess you've been down the humans lake
Drinking their water full of muck
You should have known better - silly buck
Mind you that gives me a better chance
Don't fancy your hopes with that beaut hind
She'll sniff you and you'll be left behind
Then you'll have to wait 'til next year
I think you've lost out brother dear
Illustration by courstesy of Jason Limberg
A telling commentary on the state of fresh water the world around. Thank you for writing to this prompt.
ReplyDeleteYou tell an entertaining story!
ReplyDeleteLove it with writers go in an unexpected direction with a challenge .... bravo!
ReplyDeleteI definitely think that this idea has lost out on some sugar! 😂
ReplyDeleteThis deer*
ReplyDeleteThankyou dear
DeleteHa! Made me smile- so creative!
ReplyDeleteOh deer, that's a foul way... wonderful
ReplyDeleteLOL...this gave me a good giggle
ReplyDelete"that gives me a better chance"... ha
ReplyDeleteOh water woe and relationship loss....love it
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