Monday, 18 November 2019

Early morning sun


I woke to see early morning sun
Now shining through the bedroom window
I lay my head close by, watching her
She breathes in quietly unaware
As curtains sway in the summer breeze

 The lawn I cut yesterday grins at me
Scent of fresh cut grass still in the air
I should get her a cup of black tea
Long to stay with her for eternity
For there are no better days than these

 I breathe in the perfume of her skin
Still dozing she puts her arm round me
I am intoxicated with her love
What a lucky man to have found this prize
Then she awakes and says "Darling, tea please"

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15 comments:

  1. Dr. Vandana Sharma19 November 2019 at 00:08

    So sweet and innocent love!

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi19 November 2019 at 06:35

    This is such a beautifully heartening write, Robin!❤️ I love the "Scent of fresh cut grass still in the air."

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  3. The Bizza19 November 2019 at 12:43

    A blissful morning picture painted before tea. A man who knows his fortune is a man who is mindful of the moment.

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  4. Helen19 November 2019 at 14:01

    Your poems feel so real, personal ... thank you for sharing so much of yourself.

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  5. brudberg20 November 2019 at 12:35

    What a wonderful and lazy morning... and at last some tea

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  6. Eileen T O'Neill .....20 November 2019 at 14:20

    So many things are evocative of the true love present in this delightful poem. The simple things in life that come together to create that feelgood atmosphere, as this new days awakens...

    ( Thank you so much for your very kind comment left at my poem, Eileen)

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  7. H. Hennenburg20 November 2019 at 16:08

    A wonderful moment of true love and a devoted life together.

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky20 November 2019 at 17:00

    Such lovely certainty of interdependance, my friend.

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  9. Susan20 November 2019 at 17:05

    There's always more levels than we imagine at one time. I like this description where one has a loving awakening that will last, even if she only wakes to tea.

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  10. Sumana Roy20 November 2019 at 23:43

    Love the sweetness all around from the 'Scent of fresh cut grass' to the honeyed voice. Beautiful.

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  11. Gillena Cox21 November 2019 at 01:58

    Ah yes tea please, the simpatico is lovely.
    Happy you dropped by to read mine.

    Much 💞 love

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  12. Vivian Zems21 November 2019 at 11:19

    There’s nothing like the smell of freshly-cut grass to make you appreciate the small things in life.

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  13. Joel (@Stranded Tree)21 November 2019 at 19:16

    Having a chance to be intoxicated by someone's love, you are a lucky man indeed.

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  14. THE ONLY TRUE HACKER IN THE WORLD ®23 November 2019 at 22:53

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  15. Magical Mystical Teacher26 November 2019 at 19:45

    I don't think she's asking too much, do you?

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