Wednesday, 4 May 2016
So do no one harm
Moaning and sighing
The wind tells me her secrets
But she's not our friend
The high mountain is
Even when wind whistles there
Always prattling on
The mountains love me
I sing loudly from her peaks
Sleep in her valleys
She knows me so well
I drink her fresh flowing streams
Then talk to her trees
Wind breezes away
Huffing and puffing in scorn
Birds laughing along
I rest my head down
They twitter their friendship
Happy that I stay
So do no one harm
Speaking to those that you meet
Just see them then smile
Sing on the mountain
Open your hearts and speak your words
Love one another
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Sing on the mountain.. with the secrets of the wind and the love of the hills..beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful secret to share - it is so simple you wonder why the world always gets it so very wrong
ReplyDeleteDo no one harm is a good way to live.
ReplyDeleteSigh, this is soo beautiful and such a wise message too :D
ReplyDeleteOh! Poor wind not to be part of that love! But if we think of the wind as the prevailing political scene, well may we see the difference between the eternal and the temporary. Beautifully riddled, beautifully detailed!
ReplyDeletePerfect title!
DeleteI think this is my very favourite of your poems, Robin. SO beautiful. So happy.
ReplyDeletethat's how wind always works...beautiful Robin...
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. I love mountains and I love how you wove your message from the wind and the mountains.
ReplyDeleteI like the picture too.
That's beautiful. Serene and heart touching. :-)
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Love traditional Haiku....and love your picture!
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful meditation. Great language here.
ReplyDeleteThis is the best poem I have read in awhile and they are all good! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThe mountains do hold secrets and mysteries throughout time. I recently went to a mountain retreat.
ReplyDeleteGot to luv this haiku sequence. All the images so well painted and good caution
ReplyDeleteMuch love..m
You had me at the opening--funny, I didn't think about this as a haiku sequence until I read Gillena's comment--It still has the feel of a longer piece to me--beautifully penned!!
ReplyDeleteIt's a song begging to be sung. Beautiful write!
ReplyDeleteOpen your hearts and speak your words
ReplyDeleteLove one another
Great ending Old Egg! One must be prepared to take on anyone and at the same time to give way for the sake of love!
Hank
Lovely poem, Robin! And it goes back to my quote:
ReplyDelete“If you reveal your secrets to the wind, you should not blame the wind for revealing them to the trees.” - Khalil Gibran
:-)
Very Lovely. You carried me to Mountains..I am smiling here. Thanks for the poem.
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