"Draw the curtains would you?" she asked in a soft seductive voice.
The evening was drawing in so he complied without a murmur unaware of what she had in mind.
That's not true of course he was hoping she would be amorous tonight as he knew she had been away these last few weeks on some family matter interstate.
She rarely came to his place so when he felt her soft hands on his shoulders from behind him he murmured happily "Ah this is the life isn't it?"
"No, this is the death, you cheat, don't you think my friends haven't been keeping me informed of your little escapade while I was away?"
The impact of the knife thrust in the back of his neck was instantaneous and she was glad she had earlier left him a text message on his phone saying "Sorry am running late will see you tomorrow".
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Nice twist and a perfectly set mood!
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ReplyDelete(don't tell anyone but, I was totally grinning at "Draw the curtains would you?" she asked in a soft seductive voice.
less so, later in the story.
nice one!
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ReplyDeleteWoah! A dark turn to your usual romantic Sixes! I like it!!
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ReplyDeleteI didn't see that coming - neither did he! A great diversion from your norm.
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Life holds some incredible twists, just as this one with the knife! I guess that was the last time he made that mistake!!
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ReplyDeleteWonderful take on this prompt and a very surprising ending to end the story! I'm sure he was surprised!
ReplyDeleteWonderful take on this prompt and a very surprising ending to end the story! I'm sure he was surprised!
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