Now I look at my worn
old hands
I wonder at
time’s moving sands
Marvel at all
they and I have done
With such countless
rounds of the sun
I sought comfort at
my mother’s breast
Pointing to what
I wanted best
Then touching my
fathers nose
Or pushing away a
medicine dose
My childish digging
the beaches sand
Splashing in the
sea hand in hand
Patting and
stroking the family dog
Or catching a
bewildered frog
Sneaking a touch of my classmate’s
curls
Forgetting I didn’t
like such girls
Then later after
holding one tight
Started thinking
of our wedding night
Touch is such an
important gift
The heart then
soars with such a lift
These hands drew
and wrote so many words
Setting my mind
free to fly as the birds
They wrote of
adventure and of fable
Of love and
honesty as I was able
I wonder at
time’s moving sands
As I look at my
worn old hands
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wonderful depiction of how the hands are but an extension of our life's experiences. i was born in a culture where hugs and kisses are a normal way of greeting.
ReplyDeletethis was lovely, mi amigo
gracias
I think this is one of my favourite poems of yours Old Egg..a journey with you...
ReplyDeleteA seven ages of hands ode! I love the look of hands young and old, and like how you have captured both the work of hands and the sense of touch at the same time.
ReplyDeleteHands have many stories to tell, if only we have ears to hear!
ReplyDeletewonderful...touch is a wonderful gift :) and I agree, hands have many stories to tell.
ReplyDeleteTouch build up so much of a life.. and we learn and grow with it.. actually all trough life...
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing to us your story to us. your hands are testaments to your experiences in life.
ReplyDeleteTouch definitely is an important thing, and so often we do not think about our 'hand' memories. I like the way your poem does this, like the way it shares your hand history.
ReplyDeletetouch is def an important gift...one that sadly is withheld all too much....hands can be so evocative and def tell the story of the person....nice write....
ReplyDeleteThose moving hands have much to give and offer, smiles ~ I agree that touch is an important gift specially when we care for others ~ Enjoyed your childhood & growing up reflections as well ~
ReplyDeleteA lot of our discovering of the world is done through our hands. You conveyed it well.
ReplyDeleteVery reminiscing... those old hands weigh more than how it looked.. I like your rhymes & cadences from beginning to end.. Nicely!
ReplyDelete- ksm
Well, I have to hand it to you, that is an absolutely superb poem. It actually got me thinking about where my had been and what they had done - some of it unprintable here of course! Oh, sorry about the pun!
ReplyDeleteHow I relate when I see the wrinkles of my face and wonder at those laugh lines, the tears, the life....wonderful memories in those hands and all you have touched.
ReplyDeleteHands can tell stories can't they! Loved this, and now I am looking at my hands!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THIS! Perhaps because it could be me! Lovely work, Robin.
ReplyDeleteI like this very much. All the stories old hands have to tell. Thank you for visiting my blog as well.
ReplyDeleteOur hands can reveal what our lips don't speak. A good journey.
ReplyDeleteThey look beautiful to me! AndI like the way you describe a whole life lived through them.
ReplyDeleteA nice ode to hands. And often we take them so much for granted.
ReplyDeletethis is really endearing; hands are really taken for granted especially if you are Catholic like me, we meet at Holy Mass and shake hands at the sigh of peace, and you get into a habit syndrome, yet if we even ponder that greeting its is such a divine and magnificent gesture
ReplyDeleteHappy you stopped over at My Sunday Lime
much love...
What a cool perspective - memories attached to hands. Cool write, Robin.
ReplyDeletewhat a nice journey you've taken us on....
ReplyDeleteThe history we've worn upon ourselves. Well written
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