Wednesday, December 10, 2014

Yet Again

To be blunt
I'm as drunk
As a skunk
Yet again

You've been gone
For so long
Now I'm down
I've no brain

I'm so sick
Lethargic
Been in the nick
It's a pain

Please come home
Hate it alone
And I'm all done
Ring me Jane

Thanks for the call
You said it all
I'm on the ball
Catch the first train

7 comments:

  1. sounds like the person is really missing Jane

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  2. I was going to say that getting drunk won't solve the problem, but in this case maybe it did.

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  3. realizing your fault after drinking , nice take , rhythmic composition

    Quiet Always

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  4. Beer logic is cold...like the tin in the fridge...i wonder if Jane should keep picking up or not...she's stuck on the same train by the sounds...what a story packed into so few words

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  5. This runs along the rhythm track very nicely.

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  6. Nicely expressed!
    So lovely that she called! :)
    Happy ending :)

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