Love the last lines of "music was then the food of love, a symphony of delight." Moving.
This is a nice way of incorporating the theme of love with music. I could picture both the narrator and the girl mentioned dancing in a classical ballroom. Reading your poem was like reciting a scene from a black and white movie. Really neat. :)
How music can be the impetus for a loving union. Very candid in simplicity oldegg!Hank
Ah, it is wonderful to find someone who shares one's interests. This truly IS the foundation of true love.
"Music was then the food of sweet love." Oh yes. It was.
Well written, I immediately heard The Hollies singing "Bus Stop"
I feel the muse-ic of delight in this sweet lyric narrative. Thank you!
I love how you cleverly unfurled this story over two prompt sites..i am glad i read them in the order i did..and even gladder they broke that silence
Oh, the melody of love! So sweet, old egg :)