Another visit to Dum and Yum's world
Song sings
The village where
Dum and Yum lived had been rebuilt after the storm and flood that had ripped
off many of the roofs and knocked down the fences around their vegetable plots.
The violent fall weather was over and everyone was looking to stock up for the
winter to come.
Song the spirit
woman would often wander off alone and sit on a high point of land and look for a long time
into the sky but not tell anyone what she was looking for. She did this after
the sun had set which was a dangerous time to be away from the village. Finally
Yum could not stand it any more and when should could speak to Song alone she
asked her what she did at night alone.
Song shook her
head sadly. “I do not know but there is sometime out there” and then she
pointed to the sky. “There is something telling me to look in the sky at night.
So I am waiting to see what it is”.
“But it is not
safe, Song” pleaded Yum.
“When the Great
Spirit one calls me I will go. If I get a message I will listen. If I feel that
something will happen I will look around me. Don’t worry Yum, go and lay down
with Dum else he will come looking for you and then the whole village will be
looking at the sky with me”.
So Yum walked
sadly home. Dum grunted as she entered their hut. He was playing with the
children and was glad that she was home at last. When they had got the children
to sleep Yum told Dum about Song sitting on the hill overlooking the ocean as
though she was waiting for some thing.
The sun had set
and the children were now asleep so Yum said to Dum. “I am not happy that Song
is out there alone. Go to her and make sure she is safe and try to persuade her
to come back home.”
Dum looked
doubtful so Yum went on “When you come back I will warm you up” she then placed
her hand on his chest and lift it up and touched his face.” He knew then he
could not refuse. She knew the way to his heart and so nodded in agreement.
Dum took a
firebrand with him and carefully followed Yum’s instruction as to where Song
might be. It took him some time but eventually by the light of the moon he
could see Song’s outline on the hillside. She was looking at the moon.
He softly called
to her, “Song, it is me, Dum”
“Come sit, Dum.
So Yum has sent you to look after me has she? You have a woman among many to
trust her man with this woman alone.”
Dum laughed. “You
are here, I am here but what else is here that is the mystery? You know when
things happen, don’t you?”
“We are a pair
Dum”, she replied. “We both have gifts; you can see what we can make of this
world to make our lives better. And I….I
can foretell what is to happen. Tonight I feel some thing will happen and we
will see it together.”
So they both sat
down looking down over the darkened landscape towards the sea some way off. The
sky was almost clear and a cool wind blew gently from the shore.
Dum sat looking
out towards the sea and Song hummed some words then she noticed the moon slowly
being darkened not by clouds but by a shadow slowly biting into its side. Song nudged Dum “Look, look at the moon Dum!
Something is covering the moon.
Dum stared at the
moon’s disc and slowly, minute after minute a dark shadow was covering the
moon’s face. “Is it dying, Song?”
Song started to
cry out, “Mother Moon, what is happening to you?” She stood up and stretched
her arms. “Do not leave us mother Moon, we need you lighten our darkness.”
Dum looked at
Song face and could see tears wet on her face. Then she started to sing a
mournful song of longing that he had never heard before. She didn’t stop all
the while the moon’s face darkened. Finally the moon was completely covered by
a dark mantle even Dum had a tears in his eye. What was happening to his world?
He wondered.
On and on Song
sang her lament until finally moon satisfied that someone cared for her showed
a spark of light on her rim. The light grew bigger and bigger and still Song
sang. Finally after they had been on the hillside for hours the moon shone
fully again.
Song exhausted
collapsed on the ground. Dum held her close to him not knowing what to do. He
had never been that close to her before and he could smell the scent of her
body, a mixture of flowers and herbs. He brushed the hair from her face and she
slowly recovered.
“Go home now Dum”
she said hoarsely.
He shook his
head. “We go back together, Song.”
She nodded
reluctantly “Tell Yum to see me tomorrow, but tell no one else of this mystery.
No one, do you understand?”
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Creative story. Nice to read.
ReplyDeleteJust 1 point-
I guess there's unintentional repetition. Please read through & check.
(I felt there's duplication of one part of the story)
Do excuse me if I am wrong. :)
I'm a little confused by the repetition as well OE. The story is very interesting, but somehow becomes confusing.
ReplyDeleteThank you both, Anita and Linda. Somehow I must have clicked paste right over the top of the story while I was still in draft. Hopefully it has been corrected now. The moon must have been playing tricks with me! Let's hope it reads better now!
ReplyDeleteVery creative, Old Egg. Your stories are always well thought out and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThat was a wonderful read, Old Egg, breathtaking as we waited to see what Song awaited, and then for the eclipse to pass. Imagine the fear back then of what was happening! I love your noting that Dum and Yum each had special gifts. It was nice that Yum trusted Dum and cared enough for Song to want her to be protected! I totally enjoyed this edition!
ReplyDeleteIt's nice to see these ancient people in your beautiful story again.
ReplyDeleteAs always, a wonderful read.
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