Wednesday, 8 October 2014

Our magic land



You and I found a magic land
So we went there hand in hand
Where soft hills we did explore
Limpid pools enticed us even more

Supple trees swayed from side to side
A dark forest welcomed us inside
Where woodland scents aroused us there
We frolicked in secret without a care

Sun’s arrogant glare now was hidden
Quiet whispers were not forbidden
Life’s crude ways were left far behind
And its torments were out of mind

Oh what magic was there that day
We just didn’t want to come away
When I stole that last kiss from you
You said “Don’t tell a soul, that’s taboo"

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26 comments:

  1. Susan8 October 2014 at 14:14

    Sweet exploring, indeed. I love the swaying and scents.

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  2. Mary8 October 2014 at 15:14

    I really like the sentiments here....this kind of discovery remains in one's heart forever.

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  3. Sherry Blue Sky8 October 2014 at 15:34

    It sounds like a beautiful day of discovery, back then - and again, today, in reliving it in memory. Lovely.

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  4. Sheilagh Lee8 October 2014 at 15:39

    aw how sweet I love this

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  5. Linda Kay8 October 2014 at 16:13

    Awwww. so cute. But really, but a stolen kiss that is taboo? Very sentimental poem.

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  6. Grace8 October 2014 at 18:12

    Very sweet and romantic response ~ I admire the rhyming verses ~

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  7. Alice Audrey8 October 2014 at 19:42

    Something so sweet should never be taboo.

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  8. Panchali8 October 2014 at 20:11

    aah...what a beautiful piece, draws a line straight to the heart...!! :)

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  9. Sumana Roy8 October 2014 at 20:41

    exploration in a magic land is full of sweetness...a lovely rhythm too :)

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  10. Maniparna8 October 2014 at 21:37

    Beautiful ! Love the rhyming too... :-)

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  11. Ann (bunnygirl)8 October 2014 at 21:56

    I always love a chance to escape into nature. We modern humans don't do enough of it. We might be more sane otherwise.

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  12. J Cosmo Newbery9 October 2014 at 01:13

    "Waiter! A cold shower to Mr Newbery's table!"

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  13. Anjum Wasim Dar9 October 2014 at 03:17

    Personification of the sun reminds one of John Donne's 'unruly sun'-discovery of romantic beauty of nature

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  14. Anonymous9 October 2014 at 03:49

    That was very sweet, and easy to visualise too.

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  15. Jae Rose9 October 2014 at 04:14

    Magic is even more magical when stolen and shared

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  16. Gen Giggles 9 October 2014 at 04:23

    What an exploration, it sounds quite enjoyable. I really like the poem.

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  17. Bastet's Waka Library9 October 2014 at 04:50

    So sweet, I can feel the lovely innocence of first love. I enjoyed your poem very much!

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  18. kaykuala9 October 2014 at 06:51

    So much to be shared together with a loved one. All the more swell when young people are involved! Wonderful write oldegg!

    Hank

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  19. Mary Hill9 October 2014 at 07:34

    Hi, really pretty and I love the invitations to walk in the woods hand in hand with my sweet husband and enjoy the scenery. I wish I had the ability to rhyme and create rhythym. Can't even spell these days. You are a very talented poet. ;)

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  20. Unknown9 October 2014 at 11:01

    Now that is an excursion that many of us long for. The woods are a special place to get lost...

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  21. Cifar10 October 2014 at 00:54

    that's a lovely romantic poem, beautiful

    The Performer

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  22. Novroz10 October 2014 at 10:25

    Lovely.
    I like how your poem tells a lot of feeling

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  23. Archna Sharma12 October 2014 at 20:12

    I love the enchanted, dark forest. I hope that your secret was sealed!

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