Wednesday, 9 July 2014

The odd couple

It’s eerie loving you
They couldn’t say we’re alike
Summer and winter

How guarded we are
Like two dogs sniffing at first
Before bite or play

We talk, profess love
Translucent conversation
Like spider and mate

Life is exiting
No, I can’t do without you
But can this love last?

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  1. As there does not appear to be a lot of time left, it really does no matter if love lasts by day is the way to go.

  2. I vote for lasting. Nothing says you can't last even if you started off with a bite.

  3. The image of translucent conversation is so fascinatingly loaded. Lovely write.

  4. Love lasts always if you have faith,.... Really wonderful...

  5. It's eerie loving you...a story in itself...odd things are far more curious than ordinary things...a treat to read...

  6. Nope. But enjoy it while it does.

  7. It can! Good beginnings can lead on to good endings. Great write oldegg!


  8. I'd be pressed to say that this is the sort of thing that doesn't last, but I'm something of a cynic when it comes to romantic love. It's all too good while its happening, then when it goes bad, it goes nuclear.
    Speaking of which, here's my post!