Family bio
He saw her waiting
In splendid isolation
Would she be his wife?
She saw him fidget
In splendid isolation
Her groom was waiting
He looked in the crib
In splendid isolation
Their very own child
In the school’s playground
In splendid isolation
Her precious daughter
There down in the street
In splendid isolation
Her daughter's own car
Nice, simple, splendid...I like the progression of the relationship/years...
ReplyDeleteThat 3rd stanza- brought me back to the many times I stood looking down in my kids cribs, staring at them while they slept! Then I was trapped in fear that when I walked out I'd wake them, but those moments of staring at them were so precious!
ReplyDeleteHow quickly time passes..sometimes all we can do is watch it go..sadly
ReplyDeleteThat's amazingly done - the timeline - all with the use of the prompt :)
ReplyDeleteThis 'splendid isolation' changes the happy ,(seemed at first read), meaning..
ReplyDeleteWhat kind of prompt is that SS2 ? Thanks.