Imagination and hope..maybe they are key to survival also..i think i am out of the loop of the story that goes behind yours and J Cosmo's posts..i like the first person point of view..brings it closer and also further away..reality and metaphor..
Like what you did with a set of words that I found difficult. We all have those moments when we feel that we have been set adrift. You make it all too real,
Being adrift in the ocean can be a real test of endurance. One can only hope looking at the threatening waters surrounding a little boat! It is most intimidating! Nicely oldegg!
Love the condition 'adrift'...but it seems we can allow it be just for while...and keep checking with our mind if it right direction...~ love the ocean motif here
A scary thought to be set adrift with few supplies and just hope to guide you!
ReplyDeleteYours is more hopeful than mine. :-(
ReplyDeleteImagination and hope..maybe they are key to survival also..i think i am out of the loop of the story that goes behind yours and J Cosmo's posts..i like the first person point of view..brings it closer and also further away..reality and metaphor..
ReplyDeleteOld Egg, I love how we both used the water element, in a different way of course. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletePamela
I love this. We both used eggs and coffee, but went in entirely different directions.
ReplyDeleteLike what you did with a set of words that I found difficult. We all have those moments when we feel that we have been set adrift. You make it all too real,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
When physical supplies are low, one must dip into the mental supplies of rich imagination.
ReplyDeleteHope he makes it....
ReplyDeleteBeing adrift in the ocean can be a real test of endurance. One can only hope looking at the threatening waters surrounding a little boat! It is most intimidating! Nicely oldegg!
ReplyDeleteHank
How could I not check your blog! Love your poem.
ReplyDeleteLove the condition 'adrift'...but it seems we can allow it be just for while...and keep checking with our mind if it right direction...~ love the ocean motif here
ReplyDeleteAhoy there! Adrift is not necessarily a bad place to be. You never know what the next harbour will bring and we all like surprises now and again.
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