Saturday 14 July 2018

Come back soon


I had you in my arms
And was kissing your lips
A hologram to hold
My darling petite fleur
For in my mind you were

There! Your familiar scent
Warm breath now on my face
So nestled close to you
Caressed your warm brown skin
Then felt you touch my chin

You're my garden in bloom
But cold like tundra's wind
My lifelong quest fulfilled
To find you standing tall
Oh, that would crown it all

Will you ever return?
To park your spirit here
Singing silly love songs
That anyone can hear
Come back soon, please be near

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20 comments:

  1. Aww.. that is totally sweet...

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  2. This is such a heartfelt plea, and one to which many can relate.

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  3. Robin, I know that you can't see this, but a smile graces my face. Something, I can say, hasn't happened a lot, recently.

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  4. This is so poignant, Robin!💖

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  5. I feel the longing here, Robin. Heartfelt and poignant.

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  6. You've roused some tears, Robin. :)

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  7. A sad, and lonely write...longing for what is not, is a part of life, no way around it.

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  8. Luv the all natural question posed in the last verse

    Happy Sunday Robin

    much love

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  9. I so know that wishing for the beloved's return. Sigh. Beautiful, Robin.

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  10. Embracing an illusion? Ah, it happens to all of us sooner or later.

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  11. Wonderfully poignant - I hope she returns

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  12. So lovely, so filled with love and yearning...

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  13. Will you ever return? One can feel the need and longing to know.

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  14. This sort of longing releases the kind of energy that not even a dream-being can ignore. I suspect she'll come back. And the dream will grow and grow and grow...

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  15. Longing and sadness is all through this poem. And love as well.

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  16. There is such a tender quality to the sense of longing in this piece--beautiful!

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  17. I can only echo the comments above--this was poignant and it made go hug those in the next room.

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  18. Who could say "no" if it is in their power to return?

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  19. I think they do visit ... but cannot stay.

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