Saturday, 14 July 2018

Come back soon


I had you in my arms
And was kissing your lips
A hologram to hold
My darling petite fleur
For in my mind you were

 There! Your familiar scent
Warm breath now on my face
So nestled close to you
Caressed your warm brown skin
Then felt you touch my chin

You're my garden in bloom
But cold like tundra's wind
My lifelong quest fulfilled
To find you standing tall
Oh, that would crown it all

 Will you ever return?
To park your spirit here
Singing silly love songs
That anyone can hear
Come back soon, please be near

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20 comments:

  1. Thotpurge14 July 2018 at 23:54

    Aww.. that is totally sweet...

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  2. Kerry O'Connor15 July 2018 at 01:08

    This is such a heartfelt plea, and one to which many can relate.

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  3. Therisa's World15 July 2018 at 01:34

    Robin, I know that you can't see this, but a smile graces my face. Something, I can say, hasn't happened a lot, recently.

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  4. Sanaa Rizvi15 July 2018 at 03:00

    This is so poignant, Robin!💖

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  5. Vivian Zems15 July 2018 at 03:24

    Really sweet!

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  6. Mary15 July 2018 at 04:37

    I feel the longing here, Robin. Heartfelt and poignant.

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  7. Kim M. Russell15 July 2018 at 04:38

    You've roused some tears, Robin. :)

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  8. annell415 July 2018 at 05:31

    A sad, and lonely write...longing for what is not, is a part of life, no way around it.

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  9. Gillena Cox15 July 2018 at 05:54

    Luv the all natural question posed in the last verse

    Happy Sunday Robin

    much love

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  10. Sherry Blue Sky15 July 2018 at 07:12

    I so know that wishing for the beloved's return. Sigh. Beautiful, Robin.

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  11. Magical Mystical Teacher15 July 2018 at 07:37

    Embracing an illusion? Ah, it happens to all of us sooner or later.

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  12. Jae Rose15 July 2018 at 08:34

    Wonderfully poignant - I hope she returns

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  13. Sherri B.15 July 2018 at 08:46

    So lovely, so filled with love and yearning...

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  14. Truedessa15 July 2018 at 10:04

    Will you ever return? One can feel the need and longing to know.

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  15. Magaly Guerrero15 July 2018 at 11:26

    This sort of longing releases the kind of energy that not even a dream-being can ignore. I suspect she'll come back. And the dream will grow and grow and grow...

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  16. tonispencer15 July 2018 at 11:38

    Longing and sadness is all through this poem. And love as well.

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  17. Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger15 July 2018 at 12:09

    There is such a tender quality to the sense of longing in this piece--beautiful!

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  18. C. Sandlin15 July 2018 at 12:51

    I can only echo the comments above--this was poignant and it made go hug those in the next room.

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  19. Susan15 July 2018 at 12:57

    Who could say "no" if it is in their power to return?

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  20. Rosemary Nissen-Wade16 July 2018 at 17:09

    I think they do visit ... but cannot stay.

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