Saturday, 27 June 2015
The forest loves us
When were you the happiest? I asked, She smiled and said "When we were lost in the forest". I remembered those times too. We would take our lunch and binoculars. We did not have to walk far into the trees before we found a magic land. As we ventured further in the silence surrounded us. Occasional shafts of light ventured through the treetops and the tweets and coos were heard but unseen. As we slowed our pace we could hear the tinkle of a stream and tentatively made our way to obey its beckoning. A small area lit by an opening provided by a fallen tree was where we rested. The wild ones silence was broken by our stillness. It was as though in approval the birds got back to work and flew over the water to catch insects or have a bath. Some chortled with laughter others cooed lazily as we moved not a limb. Suddenly there was a shuffle as an animal ambled through the undergrowth and started digging with its snout close to us to find food. It was an Echidna that looked up at us with his beady eyes, nodded his head and continued his quest for ants. You then said to me "It is so beautiful I feel like singing"
Singing with the stream
Rippling happily along
The forest loves us
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It is such a feeling to be embedded in the quiet of a forest. One can never get over the joy of peaceful moments.
ReplyDeleteHank
Pretty Haibun!!
ReplyDeleteI like haibun and I love this one. I was caught up in the experience of the forest; then the beautiful closing haiku came as a bonus. and felt so right!
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful haibun!!...forest seems to be an abode of love and peace here....
ReplyDeleteIndeed it does. And we, it.
ReplyDeleteYou are in a magical spot Robin. It was one of the best moments I think - to be in a special place with your loved one. Your secrets and stories are safe in the forest :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat a joyful piece...one of those treasured moments when reality seems more magical than dreaming..and makes you want to sing...
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful haibun :D
ReplyDeleteWarm and prickly greetings from the mossy floor dwellers!
ReplyDeleteVery nice haibun indeed - would have split the prose into two paragraphs for reader accessibility, but enjoyed very much, with very nice haiku at finish - a a lover of and liver-in forests my words are sincere!
ReplyDeleteThank you for you comment. Your wish has been granted!
DeleteBeing lost in the forest cannot be a surreal experience. I enjoyed all of the details, getting lost in your words! I like 'rippling happily along.'
ReplyDeleteAh there have been a few times I could be moved to singing - most likely it is just silent awe for me. The stream makes for some beautiful music
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the awe a forest can bring.. I especially loved how you captured the sounds. A forest is like music.
ReplyDeletemhm, lovely, there really is something about the forest :)
ReplyDeleteI would love to get lost in the forest too ~ Lovely haibun ~
ReplyDeleteGrace
Sometimes when we are lost is when we find the most joy :-)
ReplyDeleteI recently took some hikes in the forest. You captured the serenity one finds there. I love your story and the haiky that ends it is beautiful. I felt like I was back with the animals and trees.
ReplyDeleteWow! Wonderfully expressed.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Yes. "The forest loves us." This was so beautiful to read and imagine, Robin. A lovely memory.
ReplyDeleteI adore this Haibun Robin...such a wonderful memory retold to delight the senses.
ReplyDeleteGood haibun
ReplyDeleteHave a nice Sunday
Much love..
I think I got lost in your lovely haibun the forest can be magical as it springs to life.
ReplyDeleteSounds like the opening to a musical, complete with choreographed woodland animals!
ReplyDeleteWell written.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautifully penned Old Egg, loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteOld Egg,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the beauty and the love of your forest adventures and discoveries. A delight to read...
Eileen
This is pure enchantment. What a lovely haibun.
ReplyDeleteBless the forest!
ReplyDeleteNo Idea (Longer Poem)
Such a perfect moment captured here!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful moments of embracing with nature...thank you for inviting in the forest stillness....
ReplyDeleteThe forests love us... Do we love back? :(
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