We have lost
contact
It concerns me we
are apart
I want to see you
State the time
and place
The community
centre?
I still care for
you
Please listen to
me
Just for a coffee
and a chat
In fact I love
you
No purpose is
served?
Its decades since
the break up
How can you say
that?
Collaborate
please
You’re so
uncompromising
So it’s goodbye
is it?
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You capture those ambivalent goodbyes so well...I think it's an unsure..uncertain way to hang up...
ReplyDeleteBest to walk away from this one, I think.
ReplyDeleteHope, there is hope...
ReplyDeleteNice use of the words, the conversation works very well, I like the title, and the picture completes the work.
ReplyDeleteGood job. Randy
Well wordled! I enjoy your relationship poems. Great photo choice.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant wordling. Leaves me wanting the rest of the story!
ReplyDeleteThere's something about his tone.
ReplyDelete"Please listen to me
ReplyDeleteJust for a coffee and a chat
In fact I love you"
I love this stanza. Beautiful.
ah ... what a sad phone call, but sometimes it's just as well to leave things as they are ... lovely how you wordled this!
ReplyDeleteWhen the good-bye comes, it is difficult to accept, much less comprehend. I know. I've been there.
ReplyDeleteHad a chuckle over this, clearly somebody doesn't get the message "it's over!!"
ReplyDeleteOh dear! Time to move on methinks.
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