Saturday, 17 September 2016
Collecting Flowers
I saw her first many years ago
With a basket on her arm
Collecting flowers so she said
But I was the one that she picked
Springtime when we were both young
With a grin on both our faces
She was flicking her blonde hair
And me trying to be so smart
Smite me down if I tell a lie
But before long we were writhing
In the straw around a haystack
Was she a champion kisser
Her dad caught us of course
In his guise as a concerned father
Said it was deplorable behaviour
With me shaking in my boots
Try to be a bit more discreet
He said with a grin on his face
Being a dyed in the wool country man
There was no fire in his voice
Been married now for thirty years
Watched my daughters like a hawk
But they all chose their own partners
Much like their Ma I suppose
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Like the last line... fond acceptance as history repeats!!
ReplyDeletelove around a haystack, so romantic :)
ReplyDeleteThis made me think of The Darling Buds of May - but a bit edgier..halcyon are good to remember
ReplyDeleteha there are so many Bollywood romantic Hindi songs in and around the haystack...your lines remind me of that :)
ReplyDeleteThis is soo incredibly sweet and romantic 💖
ReplyDeletehaystack kisses nice share; happy Sunday Robin
ReplyDeletemuch love...
This made me smile, Robin!! It seems the daughters had a good example.
ReplyDeleteSo, you were once a flower! Lovely.
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I love "But I was the one that she picked." It sounds like her father understood about life and young love. I love "watched my daughters like a hawk". They had a good dad, too.
ReplyDeleteWhat an enjoyable read.
ReplyDeleteSo charming. Loved reading this.
ReplyDeleteWhat wonder it is when we can booth choose and be chosen...
ReplyDeleteI love this roll in the hay — nonny-nonny! — piece!
ReplyDeleteYou have a lovely knack for imbuing your pieces with a wonderful human quality. This is a treat!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautifully told tale, Robin. Put a smile on my face.
ReplyDeleteA sporting father is always a gem of a guy, Robin! Not many are privileged!
ReplyDeleteHank
It is the way of things....and young people rarely ask their parents.
ReplyDeleteA story that put a smile on my face.
ReplyDeleteSounds like she chose wisely with her basket of delights!
ReplyDeleteThis made me smile from the inside out--i watched my girls like a hawk as well!
ReplyDeleteAh, how nice to be collected, much as a flower!
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