Close to the town centre
Where many people go
Is a place I used to know
It is a botanic park
Green with calm serenity
Just the place for picnic tea
There's a gaunt drab building near by
Peering through the swaying trees
It’s a hospital one sees
There anxiety rules the roost
And a visit one should not pay
That would surely spoil your day
Sure there’s fruit, jello and kindly words
But also blood and ouch and tests
And strict rules for family guests
Meals are bad and blood they love
Then they’ll waken you in fright
As they pester you at night
Should you care to walk that park
And calmly feed the little birds
Think of me lying in my turds
“I’m busy now patient X
Leave your bed you must not dare
For others please have some care”
Not nice places...
ReplyDeleteA hospital visit will definitely dissolve one's pride and remove sadness.Really a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteYuk to the penultimate stanza! As for the rest: you've summed it up well.
ReplyDeleteI used to think of the hospital as a comforting place where I went to get better. Not any more.
I think you took charge of these words...not in anger..but with a humanity which highlighted even more how hospitals (or more often hospital workers) get it so very wrong at times..
ReplyDeleteRightly depicted old egg! One risked getting more sick in a hospital. Drained our resolve seeing all those others suffering! Great write!
ReplyDeleteHank
What must be admitted, the workers are doing their best….but not all issnesses can be cured. So to go to the hospital doesn't necessarily mean you will get better…maybe worst days.
ReplyDeleteBeing pestered at night is certainly the one thing that I remember from a hospital stay many years ago. Most annoying!
ReplyDeleteOne More Whirl with Basho
Hospital stays are never one's greatest experience. Now there are fewer nurses and attendants, and then there's the danger of catching something worse that what you were in there for!
ReplyDeleteAt least it's in the park, hope for sooner recovery and walking home...
ReplyDeleteLucky are the few who have never had to go there...
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Fortunately I've only ever been to a hospital as a visitor, never a patient! Have I just tempted fate?
ReplyDeleteA sad place to visit Hank ... a worse place to have to stay ... more than a hospital, this seems like a "sanatorium" or a "home" both which can be terrible. Powerfully written and very scary.
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