Sunday, February 3, 2013

With Cupid's help



I wish I could see

That sweet face of yours again

That would be heaven

 

Miserable me

How can I prove my true love?

What is enough then?

 

To interest you

I figure there must be a way

So what can I do?

 

I will bust my gut

An arrow straight to the heart

Go on love me now

14 comments:

  1. Romantic to the core...
    Hope your lady love appreciates you.

    Old Egg, young at heart. You played this wordle list well.

    I started writing one verse a week here, but then ended up writing a story verse too, so now I write a non-story and a continuation of my fantasy. Both links are in the reply section of the Sunday Whirl because Mr. Linky confused me this week. I'll give you my non-story verse link here:
    http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2013/02/sw94-judgement.html

    Welcome to the Sunday Whirl!

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  2. Where would we be without cupid?

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  3. I usually use the wordle words in a poem. Whatever topic the words move me towards. I like your wordle.

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  4. Aggressive suitor huh???stalker status at the end...:-)

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  5. Love is always a good topic. Your poem is direct and immediate,

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/02/03/rewritten-blues/

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  6. Aw, heartbreaking. Hope love comes. :)

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  7. From and to the heart also..little words as strong as arrow flints when fired together..

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  8. I blame it on the little guy with the arrow, he gets you every time. Nice one, Old Egg.

    Pamela

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  9. Perfect time of year to be thinking of love. It happens to the best of us, often when we least expect.

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  10. They always say love comes when you least expect or want it! :)

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  11. You can't teach an Old Egg new tricks, but an Old Egg can teach me a thing or two. Thanks.

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  12. Your first stanza brought someone to mind. ha! Then I realized, I have my true love with me every day. Thanks for the write. It's a good one.

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