Wednesday, 30 January 2013

The Fisherman’s Daughter

Although this poem was published just over two years ago I thought it may fit the Two Shoes Tuesday prompt word "Offer" quite well.

I loved the rolling chalk downs
With the comfort of lush grass,
Sheep bleating and other sounds
Birdsong aplenty from larks rising
Sky high in faraway grounds.

I rarely ventured so far as the sea.
It was a foreign land of flinty folk,
Drenched with spume from the sea 
Where even their brittle tongue
Was not as ours and hard on me.

From my drab life I was sent there
And bore their rough speech and looks
For which I did not care
Fashioned by the inclement weather
The seas stinging salt spray hard to bear

But there was something for me
The rough cry of nesting gulls
The pulsating beat of the sea
Barnacles resisting the sea’s pulls
Pebbles burnished by tides and…thee

The wind howled, and the salt spray
Stung the eyes so that vision was a blur.
All this, yet I wanted to stay
For the fisherman’s daughter. For her
Charms with my heart did play

She stood full square with a grin on her face
Beckoning tendrils of hair in disarray
One hand on hip and creel held in place
With fresh caught fish to sell on the quay
She looked at me and I took back a pace

No fish ever was so eager to be caught
A full bosomed wench with feet bare and brown
“What’s the catch?” I asked as I ought
“Me” she replied “Father will throw in a gown
When you take me; which he has bought.”

There were enough strong sons for him.
Daughters were the catch they could not sell
Considered unlucky at sea and weak of limb
So for us a seaside church tolled out its bell
And celebrations lasted until the light was dim

“Take her,” her father said “And treat her right.”
“I’ll be kind” I said. So we settled there
In our tiny house we fitted in snug tight
And quickly my wife children did bear
Truly this was love at first sight.

Yes, I loved the place of my birth
And the birds in the sky winging,
But there is nothing on this earth
To match the sound of my wife singing
And children playing for all they are worth

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  1. Home is where the heart is...

  2. Intelligent, creative and quite skillful.

  3. This is wonderful oldegg. Verse flows from your pen so easily.
    Great story telling .

  4. Love makes all the difference. But then, you knew I'd think that.

  5. What a beautiful poem! Lovely, lyrical rhymes, great images all around. The things we do for love.

  6. What a salty tale..I don't to poetry technicals but elegiac? Could imagine it playing out 20 miles down the road in ilfracombe..some years before but still...the coast whips up many tales..and yes..always good to belong..

  7. A love of love and a love of the sea shine through in this one!

  8. sigh, to fall in love with a fisherman's daughter and live by the sea. Lovely romantic tale!!

  9. The sweet song of a man who has had his heart caught by a sea maiden! I love that it worked out well and he ended up happy with the woman who first caught his eye. Your love poems and stories are the best, Old Egg!

  10. Lovely story. I'm curious. Did the photo inspire the story in the poem, or did you find a photo to complement your words?

    1. I found it hard to find a photo of a Fisherman's Daughter from the 19th century. This is one from the Isle of Man between England and Ireland and fitted the post quite well. I only found it yesterday. So it is exclusive to Two Shoes Tuesday!

  11. I love that photo almost as much as the term "flinty folk." YOu are an amazing poet.