Hoku and Aotea at the beach (No. 83)
The
continuing story of Ahu and Ahuahu and her family in a Maori village in Aotearoa
before European settlement of New
Zealand. (Missed an episode? Click on Ahu in
the labels bar for previous posts.)
Hoku had been at Black Sands for more than two
months now and she had settled in very well. So Aotea suggested that he and
Hoku be permitted to walk together on the beach that evening. He knew that Ahu
would say they should go with one of his sisters. He hoped it would be his
older sister Hekehoru who would be chosen as she was already visiting Tui
unaccompanied and it looked as though they might be promised to each other. Tui
was Paikea’s younger brother and wanted to marry Hekehoru but Ahu and Ahuahu were
not sure.
Paikea had married Moana and he was neither a good
husband nor wise in his judgement so they were worried Tui may also be the
same. Ahu could see that Hekehoru was getting frustrated by the delay and there
was likelihood that they would make love like many young couples did before
they were married. But as they were both children of headmen they were being
tested to show their responsibility.
In the end it was decided that Aotea and Hoku had to
take the younger siblings Houhia and Rauora with them. Houhia was Ahu’s
youngest child and she was very much like her mother, quiet and noticed
everything that happened around her. Like Ahu she already knew which plants
were useful in providing immunity and to cure ills as well as adding to food
for cooking. Rauora was Hatiti’s boy and he was bold and adventurous; already
he could swim well and loved going fishing with his Father and his elder half
brother Tangaroa. Aotea knew they would both notice everything that he and Hoku
did and said and sadly for them they would be the best of chaperones.
On the beach that evening the four of them met Moana
and Hunapo who were now married and were playing on the beach in cool of the
evening with their children Ikawhenua and Hinemoana.
“Hoku, this is Moana. She used to live with us after
Rocky Outcrop destroyed the village at Gannet Island
where she lived. She escaped and lived with us until she married.”
Moana greeted Hoku by rubbing noses with her and
saying “Hoku, if women were chiefs, there would be less fighting, don’t you
think?”
Hoku was taken aback. She had never heard a woman
speak so boldly about mens business. She coloured up and whispered “Women
follow the men, are you not worried your husband will hear you?”
Moana laughed “I was accepted here in this village
because I did speak up. You must never be ashamed of being a woman. We are as
important as men, not only do we bring children into the world we can also give
wise counsel to our husbands.”
Hoku glanced over to Hunapo who was playing with
Ikawhenua and Houhia while Rauora was looking on with Hinemoana. “Are you not
scared he might hear you?”
“Hoku, you must find a husband that loves values and
respects you. I have learned many lessons in life living here in Black Sands
nearly all of them come from Ahu and Ahuahu. You must be strong and love
fiercely.”
With that Aotea whispered, “Moana, Hoku and I would
like to walk on the beach alone.”
“You mean without Houhia and Rauora? Well do not go
out of sight and I will try to keep them here.” She smiled in reply.
So Aotea beckoned to Hoku and walked down to the sea
with Hoku following a short distance behind. Occasionally Hoku would stoop down
and examine the sand and glancing back could see that Moana and the others were
still playing together.
When they started paddling in the water Aotea took
Hoku’s hand once again and talked about the sea and the fish they caught
pointing up and down the coast then he said to her. “Hoku, you are beautiful. I
love the way you walk, and the way you look at me. When I touch your hands I
seem to enter another more beautiful world. Are we true friends now?”
“I have never had any one touch and speak to me like
this before, Aotea. You are right we have both entered a completely different
world.”
Aotea glanced back up the beach. Rauora was looking
down towards them so Aotea waved to him. Rauora waved back and returned to his
play. So Aotea said, “Let us sit here so that they can see us.” As they faced
out to sea Aotea was close to Hoku so he touched her foot with one of his. “I
want to touch more of you Hoku.”
Hoku said nothing but let her foot touch his too.
She relaxed as his fingers touched her then he laid his head on her tummy
looking up at her. She looked back at him “Where else do you want to touch me,
Aotea?”
“I want touch your hair and put my face close to
yours and I want listen to your heart beat Hoku and to feel the softness of
your body...everywhere.”
Hoku’s heart skipped a beat and she wanted him to do
all that but instead she laughed then jumped up and ran back to Moana and the
others calling out “You must catch me first Aotea.”
Aotea just caught up with her before they rejoined
the others but he couldn’t touch her again because they were so close to the
others but they both were laughing.
Moana looked at them. They were both red faced with
exertion. No, it wasn’t that she thought. They have started to love each other.
When they got back the village, Ahuahu was there to
meet them. “Hoku, your father has sent you a message. He says that it is safe
now for you to return home.”
Hoku, burst into tears, and ran into the whare.
interesting and gentle story. hi from mount barker and dverse =)
ReplyDeleteThis whole series is so convincing in its gentle sincerity, and detail, that, did I not know better, I should start to suspect your ancestry. Good episode, as always!
ReplyDeleteenjoyed this episode..always wonder what will happen next.
ReplyDeleteYes..always good to be proud to be a woman..not sure about less fighting..just a different kind of fighting perhaps!
ReplyDeleteI love how real and rounded your characaters are, Old Egg. You ascribe to them thoughts and feelings that we can share in. This episode made me smile at it's sweetness, until the very end when things took a sudden disturbing turn for Hoku. I'm trusting you will work it out! :-) Great write!
ReplyDeleteIn a gentle time before men and machines... my own stories are varied in time, an are also full of unresolved emotions.
ReplyDeleteI can only mirror what others have said and try at more quiet times to come back and read what was written before.
Thank you for your visit to my Wordle. Sometimes endings aren't written for the characters...but for the people and the many directions that they come from.
Jules
This episode really brings home to me how extensive their family has become. Between the births and fostering and other connections Ahu and Ahuahu have given rise to a whole tribe.
ReplyDeleteSorry the hub for The Serialists was late posting today. I was sure I had it posted last night and didn't check until after I wrote Suzie's House.