Lovely poem. You have a way with poems about love. I had to reread it in order to find the 3WW words.
You get my life across in so few words.
It sounds like the perfect fulfillment. I like the pleasant ending, your offspring carrying it on and the consistent beating of your hearts. Lovely.
Makes me think of someone near the end of their life, thinking back to all the good, all the bad, and realizing it was a good life :)
Time is cruel, but love sees us through.
And you have the family to prove it, Nice one Rob!
Very nicely done.
When you write poems..i feel the essence of your other stories refined and whittled to the core..brilliantly..
Very nicely done, and I am in total agreement with the sentiment.Almost the exact opposite of my entry, which, BTW, is pure fiction.Cheers!JzB
I love the line - Those years slip away - very nicely expressed