hmmmm so privately romatic this is lovely
A wonderful sweetness to thispoem, Old Egg.
Again, this is lovely. How nice it must be to be the person on the receiving end of this poem.
Ah, this sounds like a relationship of convenience where the passion has long since departed! Well penned.
Sweet and romantic.
Beautiful and charming.
Rather lovely. This reminds me of a couple I once knew !
A rather secretive affair.
when you put on your poetry cape, your words soar across the sky like superman. you should write more of it.
Ditto to gsb comment. Whimsical and sweet.You have a way with romantic poetry.There is an innocence about this.Rallentanda
Maybe a shared secret world is the best kind..
Secret passion and a love story held.Love it!