Wednesday, 30 September 2020

Rain in October


I feel sad autumn leaves now fall

I don't care very much at all

Because my girl gave me the boot

Who cares that trees stopped bearing fruit

Despite that I'm full six feet tall

Feel that I want to howl and bawl

She was beauty and so cute

As losing her is so acute


October rains pour down on me

No way did I want to be free

No cuddles close, no kisses sweet

My shattered life's now incomplete

No way now that she'll be my wife

Already I sense my cold life

She was a beauty and so cute

The loss of her is absolute


 

12 comments:

  1. Aww falling leaves and a love fallen out of your arms thats too much

    Happy Wednesday

    Muchđź’“love

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  2. It is very difficult to see beauty when one is sad. Sigh.

    Also, what Rosemary said.

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  3. I would guess rain and soggy leaves make the loss feel worse. Dreary.

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  4. We have April showers
    You have October rains
    Dreary rains by yourself
    Lonesome time of the year.
    ..

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  5. Octobers are colder without a special someone to share cozy times with.

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  6. Your poem made me think of the song from Camelot, Robin, 'If ever I should leave you...'

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  7. The sadness you write of makes my heart ache ... for you.

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  8. A loss like that will be remembered every October ever after.

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  9. Everyone knows how I love rhyming, and you do it so well. This is a delight to read out loud as it just rolls off the tongue so rhythmically.

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