Saturday, May 31, 2014

Not Cupid teasing



I’m a lucky man
Jovial gods are smiling
Countless dreams tease me

You lean over me
The scent of your warm body
Has me chasing you

Propelling me on
Through fields of new spring flowers
To your loving heart

Fluid grace as you walk
Through this my imagining
Our lovers’ terrain

Who launched this affair?
Surely not Cupid teasing
Sturdy wicked child

No! T’was you yourself
Your eyes paved their loving way
To my loneliness

Image from Chiropracticlife.com

16 comments:

  1. Would that most people could have such an experience,

    Elizabeth

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  2. I love that field of new spring flowers..wouldn't mind a detour there on our chase..

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  3. wonderful images and a sweet feeling conveyed

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  4. Very fluid and very smooth rendition, oldegg! Great shot!

    Hank

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  5. Charming and full of hope for the future.

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  6. Love a love story. So happy!
    ~ Brenda Blakey

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  7. Very romantic, Old Egg. You used a difficult set of words quite well.

    Pamela

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  8. Love it just do to the fact in just sweet and tender poem

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  9. Robin, sorry it's been awhile since I've been here. And again you take a seemingly contradictory list of words (to my mind's eye, anyway) and turn into a singular focus on love in bloom. Aaaaah... Amy

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  10. Yeah, they do that, the teasers. Nice use of the words.

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  11. beautiful write. the last stanza leaves a lovely image!

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/

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  12. Who needs a teasing cupid when seductive eyes pave the way to the heart? Thanks for this delightful piece, Old Egg!

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  13. And still I think Cupid was the first one...before you :)x

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