I’m a lucky man
Jovial gods are smiling
Countless dreams tease me
You lean over me
The scent of your warm body
Has me chasing you
Propelling me on
Through fields of new spring flowers
To your loving heart
Fluid grace as you walk
Through this my imagining
Our lovers’ terrain
Who launched this affair?
Surely not Cupid teasing
Sturdy wicked child
No! T’was you yourself
Your eyes paved their loving way
To my loneliness
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Very nicely done!
ReplyDeletewell wordled: a happy poem.
ReplyDeleteWould that most people could have such an experience,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
I love that field of new spring flowers..wouldn't mind a detour there on our chase..
ReplyDeletewonderful images and a sweet feeling conveyed
ReplyDeleteVery fluid and very smooth rendition, oldegg! Great shot!
ReplyDeleteHank
Charming and full of hope for the future.
ReplyDeleteLove a love story. So happy!
ReplyDelete~ Brenda Blakey
Very romantic, Old Egg. You used a difficult set of words quite well.
ReplyDeletePamela
Love it just do to the fact in just sweet and tender poem
ReplyDeleteRobin, sorry it's been awhile since I've been here. And again you take a seemingly contradictory list of words (to my mind's eye, anyway) and turn into a singular focus on love in bloom. Aaaaah... Amy
ReplyDeleteA dream of spring flowers.
ReplyDeleteYeah, they do that, the teasers. Nice use of the words.
ReplyDeletebeautiful write. the last stanza leaves a lovely image!
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Who needs a teasing cupid when seductive eyes pave the way to the heart? Thanks for this delightful piece, Old Egg!
ReplyDeleteAnd still I think Cupid was the first one...before you :)x
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